River Girl Edit Begins
I had to have something else to edit now that Ciara and the Faeries is done - and so I picked out River Girl because it is slightly longer but not terribly long. I want to get it all edited before NaNoWriMo begins.Today I edited chapter one in River Girl. I wish I had a different name for this novel. Something slightly more clever... but it hasn't come to me. If need be I'll send it to a publisher with this name but it isn't what I really want. Maybe as I'm revising something will come forth and demand to be the title.
The first chapter needed a better beginning so the first few paragraphs are entirely new. I like the feeling of the chapter much better now and hope I can maintain it through the rest of the novel. The chapter ended on a heart-rending, emotional note. It worked for me.
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