Miha
I revised a short story for children tonight. I wrote the original version in 1984, then revised it in 1997. When I revised it tonight I cut it from over 1200 words to 885. I renamed it from Angel's Lesson (too preachy sounding) to Miha, the name of the kitten in the story. No, its not one of those talking animal stories. Anyhow I'm excited about having this ready to be critiqued. Now I need to decide which group to submit it to. I'd like to see this as a picture book but will submit it to magazines if I don't get a book publisher to take it.#
